If she’s dreaming of someone else
I wish her heaven and for that I’m willing to go to hell She smiles and I smile back
By doing so I only hurt myself
I store my feelings in a box and put it up on a deserted shelf My mouth bleeds from inside
Cut by the words trapped within
Somehow she has broken my defenses and let herself in She has complete power over me
And being weak makes me scared
I fear one day I’ll look for her and I won’t find her there Taken away by another man
Stolen from my pleasant dreams
But if my loss means her happiness then it’s fine with me
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“But if my loss means her happiness then it’s fine with me”
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No it’s not fine with me!
Bassem in Love!!!
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Glow! don’t be so selfish.
Actually… Glow! you are right.
But this is poetry, you know.
I am sure Bassem doesn’ mean it(evil grin) … it just sounds soooooooo romantic
Sadly, I do not believe in that kind of romance! =P
lol well i see that both of u has diff opinions and holding on to them
Don’t rush to conclusions nat
i’m not in love lol i’m just dealing with a feeling that hopefully will go away
But regarding the subject, it’s fine with me! it’s not just poetry..
i believe in fate and that whole deal so i’ll be ok with anyone being happy with someone else.
OK, it’s not a crush.
It’s just a “feeling” that “hopefuly would go away”.
But prey tell, doc, why don’t you invent some treatment for that “feeling”?
It is potentialy a very harmful thingy, you know.
Ever heared of Romeo and Juliette?
Bassem!!!! that’s absolutely is my favorite!!!!
Oh God, I’m feeling down
ur poems (L)
Nat, lol don’t worry i know the treatment and it’s actually working
euphoria, thank you
and you shouldn’t feel down that’s the opposite intention of my poem lol hope u feel better
ps. miss u
lost woman,
glad you liked it and welcome to my blog
that's poem is very wonderful
I like the feeling in it
It is very broken-hearted & pained
but It is tell the real sad story in life many of peoples
this feeling is very hard
if your heart gone to the person he don't care by your love for him
& hard more if he gone with another person
& leave you alone in all this pain
you wish if he come & take tears away
thank you bassem on the nice words
Nonna, well, unfortunately, you can’t control who your heart falls for… you just can control how you react to it
And you can’t make anyone care for you if they don’t
so sometimes the best thing to do is step away and watch from afar and wish them all the best
Awwwch!!
It so painful, the feeling I mean of the girl you love disappear especially her being so slefish and you being so blinded by love to the extent that you would easily throw yourself in hell with the devil just to rescue her!!
Can’t believe such guys exist!!
Susu, you can’t say that she or he is selfish because she didn’t return your feelings… it’s not something you can control lel2saf or life would’ve been a lot easier ! And he’s simply the self sacrificing type…
and there are guys like that… just rare
You always respond in a way that forces me to say
TRUE because it is TRUE
If such sacrificing guys exist plus such faithful girls, we would be living in Utopia!! Idealistic Earth that should make every one happy and moreover content!!
loool my father always tells me that I was never meant to be born in this world
He says I belong to Utopia !