أحبك

أحبك

قلها أيها الجبان

قلها أيها الخائف الضعيف

ما بالك ترتجف

ما بال كلماتك تخرج مبعثرة

يالك من سخيف

إنها تحبك ألا ترى ذلك

لا يجب عليها أن تقلها

بإمكانك الشعور بقلبها يتهجى الكلمات

أرحها وأرحني

تعبت من انتظار اللحظة المناسبة

لقد مرت عدة لحظات

أحبك

اختنقت الكلمة وهي مسجونة في صدرك

أطلق سراحها لأجلي

أقنعني إذاً وأخبرني

ما سبب ترددك ؟

ما سبب كتمك مشاعر قد تتسبب في قتلي؟

في عينيها بحر

وتجرأت أنت على السباحة فيه

والآن أنت غريق

صدقني هي من ستسعدك

أعرفك جيداً

هي من أشعلت النار وهي من تستطيع إطفاء الحريق

“أحبك…

سامحيني على تأخرها

ويعلم الله أني وددت قولها منذ زمن بعيد

أحبك…

أنت الأولى والأخيرة

أنت أقرب إلي من حبل الوريد”

18 thoughts on “أحبك

  1. umm yeah saying i love you is not that easy, but also it’s not that hard.. i mean if u love the other person strongly enough you’d not only say it. You’d even sing it ,and absolutely enjoy the melody of its vowels…it’s that magical..
    but if someone can grantee that after this bitter waiting would come this :

    “أحبك…
    سامحيني على تأخرها
    ويعلم الله أني وددت قولها منذ زمن بعيد
    أحبك…
    أنت الأولى والأخيرة
    أنت أقرب إلي من حبل الوريد”

    well i don’t mind waiting a lifetime b3d mo bs ftraa mo7dada 😛

    as always.. keep up the good work B 🙂

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  2. these words tenfa3 fe zaman 3antar wi 3abla , 8ays wa layla , haroon al rasheeen momken kamaan agrab showaya ajdadanaa momken kamaan wala tez3al abahatanaa ,,, bas awlaaad da7eeen mara RARE enoo yetradad melioon mara gabel ma yegolaha zay ma enta kateb !!!!

    keep writing ya bassem 3ashan al awlaad yet3alamo enoo shay zay kedaa not easy cuz kelmat al 7ob 9arat keda sahla wi malahaa gemaa wala wazen ,, >>>

    Allah ye7menaaaaaaaa !

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  3. Maha, well if you love someone that much and you’re still not completely srue she or she will return your feelings then saying these words can be difficult and even frightening.
    and lol the period of waiting differs between ppl some would wait forever but most would not

    roa’a, lol leh alnazra altsha2omeya dy! tra wallah I still believe there are good ppl who are willing to fall truly in love and the idea that they’re not many even makes more special when you do find that someone 😉
    Lel2saf alot of guys say it these days without fully understanding the meaning of it and a lot of girls believe them

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  4. the worst thing a life,, when you love someone truly ..

    if u want to get into photography there is a group * jeddah shooters* they plan trips,, u get to learn more than the usual classes way 🙂

    btw i saw ur brother ,, you two are great kids .. god bless ya for ur family..
    i can’t wait to go volunteering with him 🙂

    and ur story layla consider as a hit for my friends, when they saw me talking to ur bro hassan , they asked me how do i know him and stuff ,, i had to tell ’em that his brother is the writer of layla hehehe u have fans bassem 😀 keep it up

    can’t wait for you first book isa

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  5. Khadija, thank you and welcome to my blog

    Trevy, lol “hopeful romantic” … Glad to know that I could make you smile and others too

    samaher, why is it the worst thing? on the contrary it should be the best thing in life !
    I do wanna learn photography but then trips and such? I don’t think i have much time and I do like the usual classes way … thanks for the info though
    lol @ great kids… first time I get referred to as kid 😛
    I’m happy that my story has “fans” ! .. 7arakat 7assan now getting some of his brother’s “fame” lol

    youngMuslimah, things tend to get lost in translation 🙂
    This is a poem that describes how hard it can be for someone to say I Love You for the very first time.. the hesitation and doubts.. the hope that it will get returned and those things

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  6. this was a nourishing reading for the hopelessly romantic side of me and a very nice break from surgery books :S

    thanks Bassem for sharing 🙂

    and the best thing is tht i understood the whole poem 😀

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  7. I knw tht it’s nice. I hv enjoyed it and I’m kinda sad cz it’s going to end on wednesday and thr will be no surgery sessions till next year 😦

    Do u really believe tht thr is a (hopelessly or hopefully) romantic side in all humans; because some ppl seem unsensitive as if they dnt feel those things :S ??

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  8. Don’t be sad it’s over, be glad that it happened! isn’t that a cliche ? lol
    Enjoy the other rotations as much as you can and u never know, u may become a surgeon one day!

    nah there’s no such thing as in all humans at all! but i do believe it’s something common that we share and it’s innate in most of us but we express it in various ways and levels

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